13/10/09

Today was spent editing more of the footage. We also spent time talking to our teacher and receiving feedback for our work. From the feedback we realised the ending of the film may look better with some sort of calm music to set the scene and to make the video more professional. We also learnt that the rest of the editing we have done, the start and middle is looking good. We explained to our teacher the idea of smoking at the start, from our discussion we realised that it may be a better idea not to include this is as it could seem like we are advertising or promoting smoking. As the video could influence young people we don't want to put this in the film and make Feeder seem as though they promote smoking. This feedback allowed us to see what we are doing right and what needed work.

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